Was raised his fur-covered head and sniffed the fresh air, there was no-one near. A cool breeze brushed his black fur gently as the umbreon walked around the lake, with no voices breaking the silence, but his footsteps on the beach.
Finally finding a good spot on the lake's edge, warm sand and some patches of grass, Was sat down to drink from the lake. The water was like heaven's gift to his dried-up throat. After a while, he stood up and and took a look at the way he knew the town was at. Nothing was moving, but the leaves of various trees and bushes.
Few pokémon were moving around the lake. But due to the wind Was couldn't smell anything from the direction of the town, because wind was blowing towards it. He glared suspiciously at the town's direction for a few more seconds, and then sat down again on the lake's edge. What was there to worry about?
(Stephanie's Great Post Edit:Wow! Even though you didn't use colors or any new fonts, you used details, describing words, and things that was mention in Bob's example of a good RP post. It was easy to follow and there wasn't a single spelling mistake. Good Job!)
Finally finding a good spot on the lake's edge, warm sand and some patches of grass, Was sat down to drink from the lake. The water was like heaven's gift to his dried-up throat. After a while, he stood up and and took a look at the way he knew the town was at. Nothing was moving, but the leaves of various trees and bushes.
Few pokémon were moving around the lake. But due to the wind Was couldn't smell anything from the direction of the town, because wind was blowing towards it. He glared suspiciously at the town's direction for a few more seconds, and then sat down again on the lake's edge. What was there to worry about?
(Stephanie's Great Post Edit:Wow! Even though you didn't use colors or any new fonts, you used details, describing words, and things that was mention in Bob's example of a good RP post. It was easy to follow and there wasn't a single spelling mistake. Good Job!)